hmm
Its okay.
I got bored for the first minute after about 30 seconds of it I got really bored.. (-.5pt)
I didn't like the voice in there, it took away from the music (-1 pt)
The synth was a little soft (neutral)
I liked the...er music box sound you should've kept that in there...
Its a bit repetitive, which isn't bad
but..a little...flare style would help.
over all
7/10
4/5