ok :)
From the start off;;
the pan in was good.
It was a good catch.
I didn't like the drums you used they took away from the song so far that I've heard it just...is an annoying clicking sound to me..
the synth sound could've been made louder. I could barely hear it..
The strings were great. :)
I never hear those any more in trance/techno...
The panning was good.
Over all 8/10
4/5